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Topic : "anatomy study not climber" |
stan522 member
Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2001 Posts: 74 Location: here
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Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 8:25 am |
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long time no post, really need some crits for this one
[ March 01, 2002: Message edited by: stan522 ] |
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KOryH member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 124 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 1:09 pm |
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Looking good. i likr the composition and the pose alot.
I would fix the BG. Go ahead and keep it simple but try to avoid the glowing edges effect when painting around the character.
Try some cools in the cast shadows as well.
Other than that, good job |
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Steve junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2002 Posts: 10 Location: Washington, USA
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Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 6:26 pm |
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I personally think that the glowing edges work, but the picture doesn't really show that he's a climber other than the fact that one leg is higher than the other.
The only thing I would fix about it is the left arm. It's a bit too long in the upper area. The elbow itself comes a little above the waist in most people, usually near the bottom of the ribcage. Although there are some people who have arms like that. Just a thought. |
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stan522 member
Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2001 Posts: 74 Location: here
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Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2002 7:21 pm |
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thanks for the comments, i didnt really intend him to be a climber... just a study in anatomy... i'll post an update to this soon |
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