[seethemd]

this short film is litterally killing me:

but its almost finished.

sure i lost my girlfreind, freinds, health (mental and physical) my job, my apartment, my savings, but, BUT!! its almost DONE!

a love story about sexual perversion and violence! in 3d! which runs for about six minutes, and will be released this APRIL

lets see, just under five megabytes buys you twenty seconds of high quality teaser trailer complete with music score!

requires DIVX codec, play full screen, turn sound up and lights OFF.
www.benfalcone.com/trailer.avi

[Bilbo]

i'm not sure whether or not you were looking for crits, but anyway- it's pretty good right now- the music works well and the overall style and atmosphere seems right.
i do think you have a couple of small problems there- the first being in the second camera motion- i think that instead of coming to a complete halt it should go through an animated stop- meaning it should still move slightly even after the stop. this should make it feel less cg-ish and keep the whole thing more alive.
second problem is the title that shows up afterwords- the motion feels too slow and too even- perhaps make it a bit faster and give it a slight acceleration over time.

[seethemd]

thanks for downloading bilbo, your right about the camera stop, watching it now i feel awkward when it comes to a complete stop.

[maceface]

hey seethemd looking pretty good...my one crit (if you were looking for some) is that the text could be a little better. there seems to be too much black during the text part....i cant really put my finger on it...but it needs more too it when the text is flying at you. like a bigger bolder text. other than that i love it