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mucky_wet_noodle
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 Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 10:27 am |
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Hello,
Just finished this painting last night and of course crits and comments are welcome!
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dttrip
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 10:30 am |
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| very nice kinda scary though |
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jome
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 11:15 am |
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Wot, the easter bunny's named Harry? Desillusion, desillusion... 
He looks like he spent the night in the gutter. Great. I would try to yank the arm with the egg more into the foreground. I say this because I had to look twice before understanding what was going on. This might say more about me than it does about the drawing. So maybe contrasting the arm and the bunny a bit would help for people like me. The hair's hairy, so that's good. |
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mucky_wet_noodle
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 1:18 pm |
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| Thanks for the feedback. I've gotten a couple similar comments regarding the arm so I'm gonna tweak that some. I think I just need a bit of space at the bottom of the canvas. The arm has been bugging me in general so I don't know if I'll just keep it in mind for next time or do some alterations. |
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