[Dakkan]

Haven't posted in ages, thought i migh put some stuff up. basically, it's just 2 quickies in photoshop, and a new render of my character i've slooowly been working on. comments welcome. lol, it's been so long, i've almost forgetten how to post a pic, hehe... i see that look of shame on u'r faces, hehe.
jon

[Dakkan]

oh, btw, the 3d pic is done with lightwave 7.

[MarshallX]

The only thing I can complain about on the girl is her hair, either it doesnt seem to be enough or something, or its too straight, i cant put it in words but theres something about it....can anyone abide with me here?

[galen]

I see what your saying. It looks like brown angel hair pasta to me.

The rest of the model looks nice, but it needs more than just a bump map to look "real". Texture is the key here.

[Awetopsy]

very Angelina Jolie..

the hair looks drawn in like as if it was done in photoshop.

The hair should wrap around itself and intertwine. it should be a little wavy to give it a natural flow.

[Dakkan]

here's a better link, in case the first one didn't work.

[Beowulfthefallen]

Definitely needs eye-lashes

[kerosene]

Very good model.

A couple of comments for improvement though

- The general eye shape should be checked. The upper edge is now just one arc with no big curvature changes. The lower lid's section is bit weird too. It should be softer.

- The nose is bit narrow on the lower part - not from the tip but closer to the cheeks. It looks quite ok now but not relaxed at all. It is like she is squeezing her nose forward or something.

- Last but not least. The mouth is very sexy etc but I would make the mouth edges softer and to have more forms. When you look closely the edge of a mouth there is quite a lot happening. Putting some effort on details around mouth often can add a lot to the livelyness of face. I would like to send reference pic but don't have any at the moment.

good work anyway.

heikki