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MD-02-Geist
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2002 2:51 am     Reply with quote
Hey ppl. here is some new stuff from me...

A magician...

... and the concept image

A demon (was a test with dark colours)
do you think its too dark and i should brighten the background a bit or is it ok?


And here a concept image for a picture i want to do, what do you guys think, its a realy quicky, but do you think thats ok... the theme is some heroes who escape from a horde of monsters (LOTR ) and run over a small bridge. I am not sure of the viewport, any good ideas to make it more interesting?
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2002 8:09 am     Reply with quote
No reply ... is it that bad??
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2002 8:27 am     Reply with quote
try to clean it up alittle more, or add some contrast, it looks alittle too "sketchy", maybe deine parts of the picture alittle more...


looks good tho


/cane
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2002 1:21 pm     Reply with quote
(Note: This is for the most recent picture, not the sketches at the top ^_^)

Well, I think what you have looks good; I like the composition and the details, but.. the scale of the image doesn't look as large or vast as it could. It almost looks like a drawing of a miniaturized set, instead of a vast landscape. I'm not sure if this is because the perspective is off a little (the sky seems to be sloping upwards too sharply, and the horizon seems too low), or because there is not enough atmospheric depth or lighting (regardless of the placement in the picture, everything seems to have the same brightness. As you go back should will be a hazier and the colors will blend in the background more). Also, if the sky is that dark and red, I think the wizard and snow in the foreground shouldn't be such a stark white; they don't seem to be part of the rest of the picture. Maybe darken it just a little? Well, I'm not an expert on any of this, so I might be wrong... :/ Anyway, nice work; keep at it, you have some good ideas here. :)

-Julie
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2002 12:36 am     Reply with quote
Thx for the criqique ... i reworked the magician picture once more... any suggestions?

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