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creativestyling
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 Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 9:09 am |
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Yesterday evening I watched daily news on TV. Reports `bout war in afgahnista and India inspired me to make this pic !
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dOb
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| Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 10:41 am |
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| It's great to see something different. I like the mood! |
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creativestyling
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| Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 11:47 am |
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redesigned ...
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Affected
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| Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 11:49 am |
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I like the idea, especially with the mask. I don't think the gun and the text really bring anything to the piece, though. First of all, they're compositionally a bit disturbing, and also seem to be overstating the point... The gas mask alone would in my opinion be enough
EDIT: Ha, looks like you thought the same about the gun, just hadn't posted the new version when I replied. I still think the text is unnecessary.
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NUR
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| Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 3:00 pm |
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| I like the first version more (that blurred red thing in the second...whats is it?) and I appreciate the global composition and the research for a meaningful communication...it's ok. |
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