[horstenpeter]

Yeah. so here they are. Just wanted to post some stuff, I guess they have lots of errors, but if there's anything helpful someone could point out, I'd appreciate it.
The last one was kind of a first timer for me, I rarely drew clothing without reference before that....

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[horstenpeter]

Another post because more than 8 images per post are not allowed....

[edit]yeah I realize that the guy above has a *really* weird nose.[/edit]

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[the_monkey]

its good to see you focusing on form, but now try to get the shapes accurate.

either take a figure drawing class, or go and get an anatomy book.

[horstenpeter]

Hey there, thanks for the comment. I know they are quite exagerrated in places, but I was going for some kind of comic-book style. Did I fail on that as well ?
Oh yeah, as for anatomy books, got 4 of them
I guess I could do better ones, but these are all around 1 minute....

[sandhu]

i like the way you trying to practice from different angles.

yeah, study the anatomy. it's important even if you're aiming for cartoonish style. it will give you a better sense on volume, values, and movements.

i also think you should use more clear and effective stroke. (i make this mistake all the time), thick and scrambled strokes like that could be good if you know how to put them in correct spots, but more likely than not, they'll just misleading.

just my 2-cents

[horstenpeter]

Sandhu, thanks as well. I noticed I really have to draw more careful last night while watching an animated film

Do any of you have any specific pointers on areas that look wrong in all these, so that I'd have to work on these the most ?

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