[krel]

I try to draw something
i am an beginner but i would like to know how you thing about my sketch
i saw the bot some time ago and draw it with black pencil on paper :



-krel-

[taff]

hey, da dude with tons of domains! j/k

your sketch is not bad, but a long as it is a sketch i would leave out these scribbly lines there. thin "sketchy" lins come better.

i guess it isn't supposed to be shadow.

[krel]

hey t4Ff

thanks 4 tipps
your right this is not shadow i am not so far

-krel-

[gowansy21k]

Not bad Krel, i take it was done at school in lesson? If so, i do the same stuff, especially in rubbish lessons such as R.E (Religous Education.)

You have used the same pressure on your lines in your work, use dark lines to define edges/shadows, and the rest can be done lightly etc. This defines your image better and makes that pop out, effect...

Also theres something dodgy about his chest plate, looks outa perspective (to me it does, others might not...)

Anyway nice work

[krel]

yes ^^ i do it in R.E

[taff]

one of the best classes to draw!

another good one is english, i tend to be quite creative during my eglish-classes.. don't know why! ^^