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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2001 6:07 pm     Reply with quote
OMG, i've spent so much time on this piece. Did it all in one seat, well, i have to go to the toilet. Comment and Critic are very very welcome! Thank you

No sword version http://www.josiecentral.com/files/061a.jpg

Sword:


[ November 09, 2001: Message edited by: dr . bang ]
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FireFry
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2001 6:49 pm     Reply with quote
I like the look of the armor, it's has a bit of that futuristic midevil theme to it. Proportion wise the head is looking a little big compared to the rest of the body and the nose could use some more defining, it's too light.

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Son of Cos
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2001 8:53 pm     Reply with quote
I think the picture would look awsome if her head wasnt to big for her body..easy fix just resize the body!!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 3:28 am     Reply with quote
Looks very good. I like it a lot.

Comment: the body is a bit small compared to the head.

I also have a sugestion: use some powerfull color, like red (brick red) to define her features, with thin, washed lines. I think that would look very cool.

Hope you post more soon
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 3:30 am     Reply with quote
What did you use to make it ?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 4:14 am     Reply with quote
nice work, bang. Like everyone said, the head is too big/ the body too small.
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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 6:04 am     Reply with quote
edit: Thanks guys! Hust made her body bigger and fix abit more of stuff. Twacle, i use Photoshop to make it
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2001 7:30 pm     Reply with quote
Nicely done, dr bang!
The detail in the eyes, nose and mouth is nice, but I think the eyebrows should get a little more of that detail as they look a little like single brush-strokes. I think her nose might be a little too narrow, too. Depends on your reference, of course.
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