[Abe]

Sanj Arconus, Commander of the Alitheian Freedom Militia.

Comments? Criticisms?

[dARCKLOWN]

yeah nice man the only thing that bothers me is the hand holding the gun well more the triger finder is looks like weird well any way thats what i have to say

also the pose is kinda bland u know shes shooting a gun but looks very bored or depressed about doing it

[ November 01, 2001: Message edited by: dARCKLOWN ]

[Highfive]

Yeah, it looks very slick, neat and hi-tech. I like the shape of the face of your character, too. She doesn't look like a super-model, she just looks tough.

Few crits though. There's different light sources on each part of her body - left arm is lit from the left, the face frm the front and the arm holding the gun is too dark compared to the rest of the body.

Some stronger hi-lights on her hair wouldn't go astray, too.

I think that right eye should be turned a bit more to the left. It isn't looking straight at the gun like the other is.

[Abe]

Yeah I know, its got a lot of problems. It was one of my first attempts at human figure recreation, and I really had no idea how to do accurate lighting at the time. I probably still don't. I never liked the way the hands looked or the gun especially, and I've heard a lot of comments on the inaccuracy of the female form here in general. Hopefully someday I'll totally redo it...

[Mindsiphon]

I could swear this was posted here a year ago.

[Abe]

heh, yep. it was. friend suggested i repost it just for the heck of it. so i did

[Loukus]

I remember it well, hell it was my wallpaper for a month.

JL