[jayceeL]

This is my second digital picture in this forum.

Please give me some feedback and a rating I need some stars...;-)



[ November 02, 2001: Message edited by: jayceeL ]

[Golongria]

Woah, I'm totally diggin' this. At first I just say a guy shooting a gun and didn't even notice the shadow...it really added a lot to the entire composition. I'm not sure about the white coming out of the gun though, I don't know if you're trying to get that Matrix style effect or what, cause otherwise it looks like he just shot a CO2 cartridge
Nice Job!
-Matt
p.s. ermm...I'll wait till you post more stuff until I rate you

[FireFry]

Very nice, I didn't notice that shadow myself until after I read Golongria's message.

[Jezebel]

Nice work... that looks like a really hard pose to do and you pulled it off well. ^_^

Crits: I think the bright white highlights on the guys upper half feel out of place. It isn't too often that you are going to see white highlights like that on your clothes. I'd make them closer to how you did the bottom right leg of his pants and his shoe, both of those areas look superb. Really nice shading on the pants especially.

Also, the perspective on his gun shot looks slightly off (but I suck at perspective so you might want a second opinion... *grin*)

Great work overall... I like the shadow, but if it's difficult for some people to notice maybe you should pop it out more?

[The_Anarchist]

Ahem, Why isn't the gun cycling? The bolt should be open and spitting out an empty cartridge. This would really add to the "feel" of the picture. Other than that great pic.

[DiXter]

cool pose, cool expression on the guy.. Me likes!

crit: I think parts of hes face is a bit to small, the nose and the mouth in particular..

With a bigger mouth he would look even more terrifyed..


There's only one more little thing..
hes left knee looks like it's a photo.. Have you been drawing this from a photo refference or have you been drawing this over a photo???

[Kazz]

I like how you shaded the guys pants, nice work!

-Kazz