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vegeta�ONAC
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Joined: 10 May 2001
Posts: 113
Location: Fort Collins, Colorado, United States
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 2:16 am     Reply with quote
hey peeps im coloring and letterin a new comic book along with my across the globe pals Skip (writer) and Roberto (pencils and inks). first off for more info on the comic go here
http://www.buzzbeecafe.com
this is page 2 of the comic Bzzz Bee Cafe which im workin on. let me know what you guys think!
http://www.geocities.com/vegetasonac/sequentials/bzzz.htm
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wigin
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Joined: 23 Sep 2000
Posts: 408
Location: Ottawa Ontario
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 7:54 am     Reply with quote
2 things..your coloring method looks REALLY flat..
and um the chicks remind me of BARBIEs...

anyways you can see you put alot of work in this and you have to be proud of what you have done... keep it up...
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the_monkey
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Joined: 20 May 2000
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Location: BC, Canada
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 8:49 am     Reply with quote
i think it is pretty good, but yes try to give everything more dimention.

whoever scanned the pencils could have done a better job..
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bld
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Joined: 15 Dec 2000
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Location: USA
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 7:32 pm     Reply with quote
The girls look black or hispanic.
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NextGen
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Joined: 24 Apr 2001
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 8:30 pm     Reply with quote
yeah the dialog is pretty bad.. i had to read it 2 and a half times to kinda know what's going on... and still I have no clue really what the purpose is. Is there even a story here? i got lost.
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vegeta�ONAC
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 8:49 pm     Reply with quote
shh dont repeat what im sayin here but i agree with u on the dialogue, but its not my comic and its not my life. as far as more dimensionality...for cryin out loud its a comic book not the final fantasy movie
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Joined: 04 Nov 2000
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Location: South Portland, Maine, USA
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 12:23 am     Reply with quote
I agree with the above, and i also think the dialogue sux its as dumb as a 35 year old retard
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