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MrBrian · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 7:09 pm

Comments, crits?

Highfive · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 7:29 pm

Wow! I love the way you've designed this mech. The shapes of his armoured shapes look real high tech. The pose you've given this guy is also good as well and, hey, I think he's wearing y-fronts! He looks mint!

Two crits: Is this work actually finished? The head and shoulders on this guy look like they've got refinements like hilites and scratches, but the rest of the body doesn't.

Also, maybe add some insignias, warning markings and the odd serial number to him to add a bit of colour detail.

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 7:54 pm

Thats awesome , though I think it would benefit form more work. Really cool.

Cos · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 9:37 pm

Looks pretty cool man, good construction, looks solid. Some more intricate detailing and wires and stuff would be good. Maybe make it look a bit more battlescarred too as something about it looks abit toyish as it is now, maybe the forearms, dunno..

Icannon · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 5:39 pm

ahh, well done. how did this get thrown on the second page with so few replies? i think you should make a scene out of it. it's rather bland without an environment, and i think it could use some more contrast on its lower half.
*BUMP*

Duk3Nuk4n · junior member Member # Joined: 09 Feb 2001 Posts: 48

Nice, i like it. It looks simple, but also futuristic and high-tech. Make the edges shaper and define the shapes.

Very Nice

burn0ut · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 6:12 pm

that rocks.

Pringle · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 7:00 pm

Great pose.

MrBrian · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 8:43 pm

Whee! Thanks

I was hopin I could get away without doing anymore but you guys are right, I'll add smore scratches n stuff, dunno bout an environment tho, maybe I'll save that for next pic