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Cap
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 10:44 am     Reply with quote


Hey this is from my old site just wanted to try and post something on here since i just registerd

ciao
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balistic
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 1:02 pm     Reply with quote
Not bad, but:

- lose the fractal clouds in the background, they don't compliment your cel-styled shading.

- this kind of drawing can benefit greatly from variations in line weight . . .try thickening up more important lines.
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MoleculeMan
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 1:26 pm     Reply with quote
Ireally like this anime style drawing. I say leave the line wieght alone . My problems are in the water/blood stuff at his feet an the clouds. I would agree, lose the clouds, and mess with the blood so it looks more realistic. It looks like you reflected the picture, cropped, and put a transparent red over it. It might look more realistic if you show the light source bouncing off the water.

Good work though. I'd leave the line art as is heh keep drawing

Jake
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