[Visigothan]

Here's something more I'm doing with Calamitus (rather, the characters)...

Here's this weeks strip:




and a preview of next weeks...

[Jezebel]

Vis - I think these are funny, I especially like the first one. But where did Tip 2 go?

[Superbug]

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[ October 25, 2001: Message edited by: Sumaleth ]

[Quasar]

Hey superbug you really come off as an asshole by just saying it's lame. Why don't you give the guy some feed back and tell him why you think what you think. Ohh and ive seen your comic and your not exactly a comic genius so maybe think about that huh .

[Visigothan]

Jezebel; Tip #2 is in the last panel of the first strip

I was going to say something to Superbug, but Sumaleth's taken care of this for me. You rock, Sumaleth.

[ October 25, 2001: Message edited by: Visigoth ]

[SplitSoul]

The drawings are well done, but the comics themselves are terribly unfunny. Sorry, just my personal opinion, I don't mean to cause you any emotional distress.

Will my response be edited out, too? COME THE REIGN OF PRAISE AND FLATTERY, FOR THE WEAK WILL SURELY GIVE BAD CRITIQUE AND MUST HAVE THEIR PERSONAL OPINION SHOVED BACK UP THEIR ASSES.

[roundeye]

in the second last panel of the second strip, the people should be at the same level as the last panel. its visually disorienting to have that shift.
the drawings are great but i didnt find it too funny either. i guess i have to be a man hating lesbian goth chick? thats a relatively small target audience, just so you know.

[ October 25, 2001: Message edited by: roundeye ]

[Ahcri]

I like the first one better, but I don't really get the joke in the second one.

You made me smile for the first time today.

[Bob the Newt]

i have a passionate hate for comics that reuse drawings frame to frame

[roundeye]

*gasp* even redmeat.com??

[Visigothan]

That's real nice, Bob the Newt.

I'm sure I have a passionate hate for your work as well.

roundeye;

Thanks for the tip about the visual alignment; I hadn't realized it was disorienting to the viewer...Thanks for your feedback.

Edit: SplitSoul; His post was edited because it contained nothing more than the word "lame". Rather than offering a constructive critique or an honest criticism (ie; you found the comic unfunny) he chose to be intentionally abrasive.

[ October 25, 2001: Message edited by: Visigoth ]

[SplitSoul]

Let's face it: There are idiotic people all around the globe. Sometimes we're confronted with their idiocy. What do we do if we're REALLY smart? Ignore them. Move on. We don't do the real world(tm) equivalent of editing their posts, like staple their mouths shut or ripping their tongues out. Although it may be tempting at times. So, in conclusion, sticks and stones may break our bones, but... uh, hollowpoints expand on impact?

There you go! The Sijun.com forums can be a place of social learning also! What fun.

[Shiro_tengu]

I like the first one. Also I am interested in the "hair style" of the first guy. Is he a regular character?

I feel sorry for the second guy. (heres a tip for the second guy ---pick much smaller women. Maybe they will be more to his scale!

Are you going to put up others? I would like to see more.

Also please ignore the assholes in here. They have nothing better to do then be nasty.

[Highfive]

Hey Visigoth,
Would you mind if we added our own Getting Laid 101 sketches as well? I think a lot of us have probably have painful experiences relating to the ones you given us here.

[Visigothan]

Highfive;

That'd rule...Post away, everyone.

[Superbug]

Hey sorry visgoth. I meant to put a smily face after that but i was at school and busy.

lame

lame excuse

[Superbug]

Oh and Quaser...i have a comic??? Crazy! this i gota see.

no really, i really have to see this.

[EviLToYLeT]

... hi visigoth =) Mmmmm.. I like i Like.. how long is this comic gonna go for?

[Visigothan]

As long as I can keep churning them out...