[Duncan]

Now that was bizare. I posted this, and when it took me back to gallery/finished work, my post wasnt there. So I am posting again. I hope it doesn't show up twice.

Anyways, This is my Halloween picture. It's kind of a quickie. As stated in the subject, it is me as Nosferatu. Going to be the splash picture for my web site for a few days.
Dunkferatu

As always, Crit and Comment would be greatly apreceated

[ October 22, 2001: Message edited by: Duncan ]

[Duncan]

*bump*
C'mon! rip me a new one!

[smi]

Yeah it's nice! Nows spice it up with more detailed shadings, like you did for the eyes and theeth!

cu

[Anthony]

Hey there, nice job. Work on the values. No absolute black(but some areas of really really close to black colors). Define the head shapes with fill light, even if it's dark. It's important not to leave 70% of a head flar. Try increasing the brightness of the light. His teeth seem to be lit less strongly than his face too, so bump them up as well. The form looks mostly good to go, just get the values down a bit more. Keep it comin!

[Duncan]

thanks for the suggestions.

Anthony- I was going to add more variation to the black, but to tell the truth, i got bored. I hadn't noticed that about the teeth, but now i do.

Thanks again