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Lukiaz
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 7:59 pm     Reply with quote
Couple'a quick pen sketches.
The usual 'happy go lucky' content.


http://www.tbns.net/lukias/Pen/i_broke_a_nail.jpg
http://www.tbns.net/lukias/Pen/graveyard.jpg
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the_monkey
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:14 pm     Reply with quote
man, these are some very well done sketches. i have no crits, i just wanted to tell you that im a fan.
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:16 pm     Reply with quote
what else can i say, except... you kickass?
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Matt Elder
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:32 pm     Reply with quote
Those sketches are kick arse. The shading came up very nicely but I would try to draw on paper without the lines. In general, I would be a bit concerned about proportions of sections. In the broke a nail image, the neck area is just too big for the rest of the body. Also look at the characters left bicep, it comes too far in and doesn't site correctly with the shoulder there.

As for the graveyard one, look at the characters left forearm, absolutely massive and too big for the lower arm.

Very nice though.
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Ahcri
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 6:49 am     Reply with quote
Pen is such a inflexible medium, and you've used it so well. Good work.
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Lukiaz
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:07 pm     Reply with quote
WOOP a fan! Thank you kindly the_monkey

Haha Cheers Burnout, your stuffs kicking arse lately I might add

Thanks Matt. Yeah the whole lined paper deal...long story. Your right though.
Heh anatomy wise, they're definitley add tad distorted to say the least. As far as his neck goes it is indeed too long. I would have liked to make it bigger, more distortion the merrier.
I exagerated the forearm that much thinking that it would be an obvious intention. BIGGER next time!.

Thanks Achri. Once you get around the inflexibilities its really quite flexible.

Hey how do I make the pics show instead of appearing is links???
(I read faq me no understand good no)
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Cos
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:54 pm     Reply with quote
Da biggetht ganthta on da net DA LUKIAZTHT iz back!!! and he bringz dem biro sketches for yo lined paper asss!!!

Sketches iz nice.. Graveyard sketch lookin nice, (niiiceee). Tho, kinda looks more like a zombie with one arm too big for his body and a beak growing out of his shoulder standing on a guy with a egg for a head, than a graveyeard.. (maybe adding some graves, tombstones, few trees maybe, might help it look even more like a graveyard!)

second one is nice (nniiiiccee) too, espescially his neck

All in all nice work!

(nniiicccceeee)



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Lukiaz
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 4:19 pm     Reply with quote
Mr Koniotis reprezent'n.
Haha...
read my replies. The arm is supposed to be big!.

Hey I got a pic for you. You still keen for collab?.
Gimme the nod and I'll tell ya more.
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gowansy21k
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 7:49 am     Reply with quote
Wow! Nice artwork man! I really like Pen art, it rules. I do this sorta stuff at school, in shit lessons like R.E. on my folder etc. I really like this kinda work, have you got more? i understand that some parts of the body have exageratted features, i think it works better...

(I'm no way your standard...)
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SuperFish
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 8:40 am     Reply with quote
Great stuff Lukia. I couldn't help but to look at your profile. You are a Tech Support?! You should be an professional artist!!!
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Quasar
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 9:21 am     Reply with quote
I have to agree wih superfish based on these scetches you are deffinatly pro talent .Did you use a bic pen or something the shading is really nice . Ohh and please find another web host I am suprised no one has mentioned this but the web host you are using is just wayyyy slow and I am using a T3 connection at work so I know it's not me.
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Lukiaz
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 1:20 pm     Reply with quote
gowansy21k - Thanks man. I know what you mean, I used to doodle constantly on my books and folders at school....my teachers learnt to dislike me for that...*sniff* .
Yeah distortion/exageration is cool, easier to convey certain elements with that freedom. www.geocities.com/creativ1_nz/
Thats got some old and older work(98-00).

SuperFish - Thanks but I think your pushing it there. I'm really not very versatile and really not that good. Not being modest, if you look around you'll see some *serious* talent.

Quasar- Cheers mate. Again thats too much *blush*. Yeah I use Bic. I've been waiting for someone to confirm that my host is slow!!. It is isn't it?!. SUCK!. Geocities is useless(previous host) and 'tbns' is rediculously slow.

ANYONE GOT A QUICK, RELIABLE, PIC LINKING HOST????.

[ October 11, 2001: Message edited by: Lukiaz ]
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