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Author   Topic : "Marya Farah"
saripol
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 6:39 am     Reply with quote


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 7:07 am     Reply with quote
I think its very solid

i like the colors you choosed at some places, like in the shadowed area of her shirt, the slightly blue/green tint works very well

i think the top of her face might be a little too reddish, compared to the pale neck ...
and you should refine more the hair and eyebrow, they look blurry compared to the sharpness of the chin for example
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 10:05 am     Reply with quote
Hey Saripol,

Your portrait paintings get better with each one you post. It's been nice to observe your development. I like the painterly feel of this one in particular.

Where should you go from here? Perhaps, add a little more sparkle to her eye - they look too flat. And, some more definition to her hair - stranding to make it look more real and less plastered on.

Radiater.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 4:49 am     Reply with quote
mime, thanks.. as for the blury part.. i think it's me.. i'm just too damn lazy hehhehe

radiater, thanks.. you've notice it too?? hehheh all thanks to sijun and it wonderful members which is always there (well, when the forum is not down) to helps and inspires..

i'll try and put more details in
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