[V Shane]

[ October 09, 2001: Message edited by: Shane_of_IBS ]

[jcFIG]

Good work Shane. Onto the crit, I see a few problems with your painting. First off, there is way to much white (I have the same problem when I paint live models in acrylic) which tends to flatten things all around. Second you need way more darks, try working up a few comps in black and white, then in color thumbnail size. Once you figure out which one you like the best, then go to the full size painting. ALso, bump the contrast up a bit and decide on what your first read will be, also put in a background, now matter how dark it may be. I really like what your doing with the reflected light in her hair and her pose. Later.

[ October 08, 2001: Message edited by: jcFIG ]

[V Shane]

People must be thinking this is some sort of rant topic, guess I should have renamed it,
"Fleshy Elven Woman with Deep scratches on her Creamy white thigh"

Hmmmm maybe I will, thanks for the comments. Nice thin about digital, you can rework it anytime

Shane