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Andromeda
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 Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 4:03 am |
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I was supposed to give it proper colors and all, but this was for a school project and i had to finish it quick for submission ...
Oh Isnt the moon pretty ?
Looks so real dont it ? ...
Thats cos it IS real ..
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Brain
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 6:25 am |
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If you'd drawn the moon instead of photosourcing, it wouldn't look as out of place as it does now, imho. Also, blood on the knife, but where on the guy? Or did she drink it and is saving the knife for later? *grins*
For a quick school project, I give it da thumbs up! Actually, I give it thumbs up in general, so nerr! @;-) |
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 9:09 am |
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| I don't get it. What does it mean? |
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FireFry
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:51 pm |
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The colors are pretty bright even though it's supposed to be night time. Her right arm from the elbow to the hand looks funky because of the angle. Good job on the dead guy, kinda reminds me of one of the skits from Heavy Metal.
"Thats what you get for smoking MY WEED!" |
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ex
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 4:07 pm |
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| Ah, mud. heheheh nice job though. |
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 11:05 pm |
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| Yup, moon looks out of place, is that brown stuff blood? It looks bad. I don't like the stars either. But everythings else is cool. |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 11:19 pm |
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thats pretty grotesque... :P
I agree with all above. |
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 11:46 pm |
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Brain -
She didnt drink it, but she did mop it up and kept some of it. She gone thru lots of work not to mess up the body, even tidied up the cut. His insides are mush, cept for the bone. Think of the carcass like a bowl of blood. Thats what she did to him.
Sacrelicious -
the class was told to bring anything you can touch/smell or taste... in the class what we did was close our eyes, and the other person would hand you the stuff. If it was candy, she'll feed you the candy, if it was a strong smelling item the person would place it under your nose. and if it was a nail, the other person would put it in your hands and tell you to close it real tight.
The idea is not to see the thing, and after youve gone thru 5 to 6 people, you sit back down and jot down what you tasted, smelled, felt or whatever.
And make something out of those feelings.
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The brown stuff is 'supposed' to be mud. :P |
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weaver
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 11:55 pm |
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| Foreshortening on the woman will add a dynamic effect. |
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