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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 9:43 pm |
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Well maybe not but I can pretend heh. This started off as a lighitng study, using
myself by candle light in the mirror for reference. Ended up working it into
this mean jedi bashtid who looks like me. cool. Comment and crits always welcome =)
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hethebar member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2001 Posts: 138 Location: OC.CA
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 9:46 pm |
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Rad. Just a little blotchy though (at least it's not airbrushy and fuzzy). Good job.
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nickmarksdotcom member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 244
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 9:50 pm |
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Rofl...I hope you have all your eyes though. It is bada$$ pic. THey should have you do some art for the new Jedi Knight game Keep up the good work. |
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jcFIG member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2001 Posts: 189 Location: San Diego, Ca.
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 9:56 pm |
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I love that painting, especially the dramatic lighting on the face, that and the scared eye makes him look like one bad-@$$ jedi.-Whats his name just so I make sure and stay away from him if I see him in a cantina? I can't wait to see more. Later. |
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Breakerboy2 member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 96 Location: NYC
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 10:12 pm |
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This rocks. Don't see too many truly painterly pieces around here.
The lighting is superb. The portrait is really great - lots of character!
I'd just suggest bringing the clothes and hair a little closer to the tightness of the face and call it day!
Great piece. |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 10:26 pm |
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Absolutely /stunning/ Cos. I'm staring at it with my mouth open!!
I wish I could offer some crits or at least something more, but it's so early in the morning and the picture is so...sweeeeeeet... |
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Bishop_Six member
Member # Joined: 13 Dec 2000 Posts: 646 Location: Arizona, US
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 11:01 pm |
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Niiiice I like this a lot, cos(being a huge star wars fan helps a little ). I really like the lighting. It adds a nice bit of mood to it.
The crease under his scarred eye looks kinda strange. Like how it doesn't curve back up toward the outer edge of his eye as it does with the other one. Could be wrong, though.
The scarred eye itself, I feel, isn't reflective enough. Even though it is damaged, it's still an eye and should be a bit shinier in my opinion.
Keep it up! |
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Pat member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 947 Location: San Antonio
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 11:16 pm |
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Yeesh. I wouldn't want to meet you in a dark alley. Sweet brush work. I like the loose stuff on the lower part of his collar. I'm a big fan of the color scheme too... my last two paintings have hovered in the same range. Nice work, sir.
-Pat |
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adigra member
Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2001 Posts: 60 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 11:18 pm |
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Excellent painting. I really like the painterly feel and the color scheme. I love the texture on the face, especially the forehead. The head is perfect and I think the shoulders are lacking compared to it. I mean I like how it dissolves in detail further from the head it gets but it's a bit abrupt between the face and the collar. I also think that the red light coming from the (our) right doesn't quite match up with the lightsaber. It seems that the light should be coming from more straight on if the saber was in that position. I think it's the nose where I can see this the most. I would not mess with the face as it is (like I said) great but maybe just move the saber a bit to the right.
None of these things are big enough to take away from the (great) quality of this pic, I am just trying to do my part in giving constructive crits.
Great work.
Oh just a thought (maybe a cheesy one) you could add a braid coming from the back over the shoulder in the Star Wars fashion. |
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 1:14 am |
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very nice Cos!
Only a couple of suggestions - the light from the sabre is too red I think. Shouldn't it be more yellow? You could make his (!) right side abit darker to allow for a bit more drama in the lightning from the lightsabre. Also his right shoulder should be toned down just a little.
maybe add a bit of backglight?? well, maybe not.
Very solid pic!
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java junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Aug 2001 Posts: 38 Location: sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 2:14 am |
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Excellent picture Cos!
Its a bit rough but I like it that way, the only thing I would add/change is what Boomstick said, darken his right side a bit, to make it more dramatic. |
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simuartist member
Member # Joined: 22 Jul 2001 Posts: 57 Location: St. Charles Missouri
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 2:15 am |
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Wow awsome COS...wow  |
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Gordillo member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 308 Location: Guildford,UK
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 2:40 am |
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Very,very nice Cos!  |
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Shiro_tengu member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 430 Location: W. Australia
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 2:48 am |
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Cos, this picture is very good. I would love to see others. That guy looks awesome. I love the colour range you have chosen. Your techneque on the skin is great. I would rather see a guy like that in Starwars then some stupid 10 year old that can blow up death stars on autopilot.
Well done!! |
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Menace junior member
Member # Joined: 25 May 2001 Posts: 17
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 4:02 am |
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You beautifully captured his eyes, very well done I think this is what makes it!  |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 4:10 am |
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This pic shows HOW dramatic you improved. It�s great, has a nice anger-feeling to it.
I would just make that light saber more redish, instead of making the rest more yellowish. |
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eyewoo member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 2662 Location: Carbondale, CO
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 5:45 am |
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Nice job... I definitely get the feeling this is not a guy to fool around with.
Cool!
fleabrain... |
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-Tepox- member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2001 Posts: 352 Location: Finland
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 6:05 am |
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yep!. Great work.. I like also the dramatic ligting and the way he stares me! yikes. :O
Only thing what i could crit is the hair(upper part); It kinda goes messy here and there. I don't know why but it really bugs me. |
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Kazz member
Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2001 Posts: 126
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 6:25 am |
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ahjhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yeah!! |
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Leo member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 1999 Posts: 328 Location: Russia
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 6:25 am |
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very nice Cos!
I think you can add more 'mood' into this painting if you'll put dark deep shadows on the left (our left) side of the dude (read: use only one lightsource - lightsaber) and even more add a backlight and fix the hair. Just a suggestion. Anyway painting looks great!
-leo |
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Binke member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 1999 Posts: 1194 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 8:21 am |
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Wow Cos, this is really really great. I see lots of improvement I think this is your best piece so far. Nice shading, colors and anatomy. My only crit would be to tighten up his robe/cape/dress whatever. |
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 8:40 am |
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yeah..what they said
what else can i say??..sure ill join the dark side...no worries |
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kos.mandis member
Member # Joined: 14 Nov 1999 Posts: 274 Location: in front of a pc
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:19 am |
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Hey man, that's AWESOME!
Go on son, get in there  |
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Akolyte member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 722 Location: NY/RSAD
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:43 am |
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Awesome work Cos, I like the background and lightplay a lot. This makes me want to break out my lightsaber and kick some serious Sith ass with it  |
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Motorfish member
Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2001 Posts: 74 Location: Redmond, WA
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:44 am |
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I like it a lot! It almost has a very "Samurai" feel to it, at least to me! Bravo!!! |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:46 am |
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Wow! |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:47 am |
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Really cool!
In a hurry right now....
Will write more later.. |
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dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:49 am |
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woa micke, you're still posting at Sijun?! |
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Zorglub member
Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2000 Posts: 268 Location: Ontario Canada
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 9:51 am |
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Well I don't know if you're a Jedi or not but the force is certaily with you. I don't really have anything constructive to say, Great Job! |
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 10:03 am |
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totally awesome cos, def. the best work I've seen from you ever ! really cool face. |
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