Sijun Forums :: View topic - Art for Top Secret Project-Need Opinions!

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 6:35 am

Hey Guys,

I need your help. I am working on a project that I really can't talk too much about yet, but would love to get some feed back on. Check out my site (click here) and go to the "Vanhoozer Color Art" page. At the bottom, there is a drawing of a little girl in bed reading her monster a bed time story. I would love to know what you guys think. Any criticism, comments, input, is always appreciated.

Thanks.
All input will be considered!

Jeremy

dementia7 · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 6:39 am

Very nice....although the image is in the Sketch Section...not the Color Section. Also if you hadn't told me I would've thought that it was a shy monster who was [unbeknownst to the girl] helping her read.

But the illustrations are very nice

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 6:41 am

I am really sorry guys....It is in the "Sketch" section. I guess I should know my own site.

My apologies.

Jeremy

silber · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 6:49 am

I went to your HP but the pic won't load

please post a direct link to your pictures
-I don't want to browse somebodys HP each time to see his picture

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 6:52 am

I really apologize guys. My server at Apple.com doesn't seem to want to allow direct links, so for right now the only way I can share with you all is to have you go to my site. If you have any ideas, let me know.

Jeremy

krobar · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:05 am

Can'y see this pics...
but your job is very clean!

[wakestarr] · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:06 am

Great work!

Even if the site doesn't allow linking it should work by just copying the url to a new window...
http://homepage.mac.com/jvanhoozer/.Pictures/Sketches/Bed%20Time%20Story.jpg

..wakestarr..

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:09 am

Hey! Thanks wakestar!

See, it pays to have friends who know what they are doing.

Thanks again. It will help in the future!

Jeremy

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:15 am

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VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:16 am

Picture

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:22 am

New Picture

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:24 am

Ok guys, thanks to a bunch of F ups, I figured it out. I promise no more crap.

Thanks Again,

Jeremy

krobar · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:29 am

Don't use for your online Html documents, accents, space beetween words, ponctuations, etc...most of platforms like Windows doesn't support it...maybe it's the reason of the disagreements.

VanhoozerArt · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:40 am

jerO · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:04 pm

HUZZAH! hehe cool, you got it to work.

Dude, awesome stuff man.
I dig your style.

So are you drawing/scanning/coloring, or
what technique are you going forward with
on this particular piece.

Is your only "formal" training your
time spent at Disney's?

really nice,
jerO

P.S. if you want any crit, the only thing that i can see
is that the perspective on the tip of his tail is a little strange.
The rest of his tail seems to be hugging the bed, but i can't tell if the puff
is above or receding into the background.
if that made any sense i commend your problem solving skills as well as your draftsmanship. hehe.

[ July 31, 2001: Message edited by: jerO ]

kanabis · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 7:44 pm

i love the expression on that monsters face