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MoleculeMan
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:08 pm     Reply with quote
This is my first picture without the use of Dodge and Burn. I hope it turned out nice. I am looking for crits on ways i can improve. I dunno heh.
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KleptomaN
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:16 pm     Reply with quote
I like it.

It needs some cleaning, though - especially the stray lines and the coloring on the right arm.

The blades could also use a bit of smoothing and highlighting.
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 5:45 pm     Reply with quote
move to wip mod ;D
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MoleculeMan
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
its that bad? heh, if your implying that it needs a lot more work, go ahead and move it mod, i could work on it some more and repost it when its better.
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Shirotsugh
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 11:16 pm     Reply with quote
I like the eyes, reminds me of the BOF characters. However, the rest looks like amatuer work; you need to make it look more cohesive with itself.
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