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Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

This version is a sketch a preview, I'm working on a more clean version and more detailled... crits please...

bOx rOcket · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 1:44 pm

Look like someone was seen the Bjork video.

KiNgStiNg · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 1:44 pm

spunky concept

c · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 1:45 pm

all... is... full... of... love...

ahhhhh

Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

Right for the robot texture I'm little ispired from The clip All Is Full Of Love of Bjork but for the posture I'm inspired of this... (crits the up draw please...)

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Dryfire · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 2:17 pm

hell yeah, you rock

Matthias · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 2:23 pm

hey uhh..... noctali....... u mind telling us where u found that?
ehemm ehemm

ex · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 2:57 pm

*work in progress* (!!!!!!)
I think I remember seeing that on www.persiankitty.com

Isric · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 3:17 pm

yay! more porn inspired art! (note sarcasm bleeding from my mouth). At least you turned her into a robot this time.

Deceiving Angel · junior member Member # Joined: 18 Jul 2001 Posts: 9

it really help if u know took those #$@$!@%!$%!#$#!...white bars off of her

Frosted Flame · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 9:11 pm

Dude, do you just sit at your computer and beat off to your attempts at creating realistic naked females? I find your art to be far beyond inappropriate and beyond the limits of visual appeal.

If you want to see how to treat a nude with respect and produce an image that is both provocative and artistically stunning, check out Fallen's stuff.

Usagi · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 9:42 pm

ghost in shell? nice. really cool.
www.psychoticepisode.com

ex · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 10:32 pm

Frosted Flame - uhm, since when are naked robots offencive? jesus, simma-down-now!

But I do agree about Fallen's work.

Bob the Newt · Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 11:13 pm

ex - your opinion was invalidated the second you said "simma down now"

not that it was valid before either.

no, im not joking about that.

Frosted Flame · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 4:46 am

Uhh.. ex, did I say nudity was offensive? I don't think so. I said that the way Noctali presents it is offensive, and to me it is. People are allowed to have their own opinions in this day and age. I'm sorry that I don't coform to your standards. :P

ex · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 10:33 am

I was only kidding anyway bob.

Well next time you post, Frosted Flame, think about conforming to my standards. And re-think the post. It's funny how you are the only onw to find it so inappropriate. =D

Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

I am sorry that my art does not like everyone but I draw before very for me, for my pleasure and I like kind of drawings, I will to draw things more unusual but it is its which I like, then earlier please crits the way in which I draw and not that I draw this manner I will myself to improve...

Mordecai · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 3:54 pm

hmmmm....for some reason...im thinking that figure pose looks strikingly similar to....

could it be???!.....have a look HERE! ...

Felaxx · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 4:08 pm

yes yes definately inspired by chris cunningham's "all is full of love" video. In my circle it would in fact be called a "fan art" but anyhoo... Is there going to be a background? Or just robot girl? As far as composition goes, the large empty space on the right hand side needs something, it feels awkward. I like the way you rendered the surfaces... The sparks could be handled a bit better. It looks a bit like gold dust or paint splatter? Was that intentional? Also her nose seems to sink INTO the face with the shading as it is. Put some shine onto the tip of her nose to help that a bit, unless you purposely want her nose to look inverted... I'd also like to see deeper dimension on her lips. I dunno the face is very important in a picture, that's what people see first, usually... um I think >_< Having all that crapola said I understand this is a sketch but I'm treating it as a finished piece (it;s in the finished work gallery) um but maybe that;s why some of it seems a bit sloppy? I like the way you did the feet. The curl of the toes is nice. Ok I'm getting off the soap box now...

Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

Thanks Felaxx for your good crits

(Yes I'm a fan of the music video clip of Chris Cunningham the clips for Aphex Twin, Bjork and the others...)I'm working on a clean version but for the sparks I need help or in the finish version i'll not do them, fore the looks and nose is do, I still will try to make a background but they is which I have of harder A to make, I'll work in this night...

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Frosted Flame · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 11:28 pm

Isric
"yay! more porn inspired art! (note sarcasm bleeding from my mouth). At least you turned her into a robot this time."

Did you conveniently miss that post, ex? Noctali's art has been the subject of many a debate lately. You know just as well as I do that MANY forum-goers find his work to be in bad taste. It must be difficult to maintain that raging intellect of yours, ex.

FireWalker · Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 11:35 pm

There's a lovely "Work in Progress" section (or so I've heard) around here somewhere for a reason... eh?