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Superbug
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 Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 8:29 pm |
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Hey all. Long time no Sijun.
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Viridae
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| Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 9:33 pm |
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| these are beautifully done. The only critique I can give is that for the first one the sun's rays don't quite seem to fade out as well and in the 3rd one the stars seem a bit odd. Nevertheless great work. I love the brushstrokes. Keep it up. |
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ebrian
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| Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 9:51 pm |
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I quite agree with Viridae that the sun light should be more tender, to make it more real. Most of the brushstrokes are tough and hard, if you make some of them(the light, ray)more soft, I think the picture will improve a lot. Any way. very impressive, good imagination.  |
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Superbug
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 8:42 am |
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HEy, thanks for the critique's guys. I'll just fix those light rays up a bit more. I'm sure that first picture is quite wrong techically though. I doubt light rays would really shine out like that, at such a forced angle I guess, but ... whatever. 
Oh by, the way, the last pic is from Soul Reaver, Legacy of Kain series. |
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KOryH
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 8:49 am |
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YES RAZIEL ROCKS!!!!!
(secret message: BUY SOUL REAVER II BUY SOUL REAVER II BUY SOUL REAVER II )
...subtle ain't I...
Seriously,
Cool stuff, I'm glad to see people still like Raliel and the Gang. |
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 9:25 am |
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| I really like the second one... has a nice sense of scale |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 9:43 am |
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| wow, those are just awesome.. i'm really diggin the colors and the ambiance of these pics.. really cool. atmosphere is also great in these and so is emotion and mood... its all good ;-) |
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Superbug
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 8:59 pm |
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Hey hey, thanks for the replies. I was reading the thread by taytae (I think, sorry if I'm wrong), on what's become of the forums crituque wise. I quite agree with some of the things he has to say, so I'm gonna give this package of drawings another attempt by boosting it up. Sorry if this pissed anyone off, and please
rip these drawings apart. |
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