[SeriousGrandpa]

It's a character that I'm doing for a game modification. Well, I think it's finished now. I made it with a mouse and it took me about two days to complete it.
Anyway, take look at it(drag the link into your address bar): http://www.angelfire.com/weird/seriousgrandpa/images/portofolio/SWATdude2.jpg

And here's the sketch:
http://www.angelfire.com//weird/seriousgrandpa/images/portofolio/SWATdude.jpg

Please post your comics and critits. This is my first paint job in Photoshop and I would like to improve.

[ June 25, 2001: Message edited by: SeriousGrandpa ]

[Duracel]

hmm... youre image isnt there

youre server dont give the permission to look at your pics :/

[SeriousGrandpa]

You must drag the link and drop it in the address bar. Or you can copy the link and paste it in the address bar.

[root88]

SeriousGrandpa: nope

[Cicinimo]

me neither

[NextGen]

lol its cause he put double forward slashes in the url, and some how did it twice.

[edit] well i tried to fix the links and put them up but when you click on it you get the stupid angelfire image. stupid angelfire[/edit]

[ June 25, 2001: Message edited by: NextGen ]

[Ahcri]

I think you may have over-used the soften brush, that made his armor look a bit soft. Maybe you can add some stronger shade to increase the contrast. Also, I think this guy's crotch is kind of crooked. Nice design, though.

[ June 25, 2001: Message edited by: Ahcri ]

[Sparks]

Definately too soft! With the shape of his armor he should have some good lights and darks on there, some break out the airbrush and crank the contrast up on him. He lacks detail too... you could apply a generic texture to his armor if you don't feel confident detailing it yourself, but anything to keep it from being completely smooth, unless you're goign to show the light reflecting off of it

[SeriousGrandpa]

Thank you for all your comments. They're very helpful. I'll try to work on the image a little more.