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Al Yu
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http://www.alyudesign.com/scifi18.html
Just finished another Military Space Station. Originally I was going to use this drawing only as the background for a spacecraft. But got carried away with the space station details and decided not to cover up any part of the station. I will paint another background for the spaceship tomorrow.
All elements hand drawn and put together in Photoshop. |
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Strawberrysauce
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 6:02 pm |
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oh my god, that is astoundingly good!
don't feel qualified to give any crit! |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 6:08 pm |
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I really really really really really really really like this! Exept for one thing, its too colorful. Military related things are usually not very colorful, they're usually designed to be camoflaged, example, M-1 tank in the desert is usually dark yellow, green when in forest.......etc
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Dizzogg
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 6:10 pm |
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Wow indeed.....Your stuff is very nice...definitely bookmarked your site....
No real crit....Your stuff is really tight! |
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Drimmen
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| Posted: Thu May 17, 2001 6:12 pm |
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Excellent work. You have technical drawing wired. By itself, there is enough to keep the eye moving around the piece for a long time, trying to take it all in.
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It is hard to grasp what is going on. The dark mass behind the station seems ominous, like the objects are going to collide. Maybe it's just the cropping, but it's hard to get a sense of 'space' which leaves me with a feeling of claustrophobia. You definitely fill up your scenes.
You have great skill, and judging by your website, you've used it extensively.
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Al Yu
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:07 am |
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Thanks for the comments and crits!
dr.bang- I will try desaturating some colors to see if it will look better.
Drimmen- I was first planning to use this image only as a background to an approaching spaceship then decided not to add the spaceship. Maybe I should add the spaceship as planned so the tight cropping make more sense.
Lukias- I removed most of the buttons on the page. Hope it looks better. |
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elam
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:29 am |
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Wow. Your stuff is amazing.
I only wish the pictures were a little bigger.
elam |
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v1510nAry
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 9:33 am |
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| Same here we wanna see the amazing detail u put into your amazingly cool pictures ... |
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Luci
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| Posted: Fri May 18, 2001 5:18 pm |
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This is beautiful.. I am.. totally speechless.. keep it up, I wanna see more more more!!!! The metallics are beautiful.. Wow.. I love this so much....
-Luci |
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