[Zorglub]

Very good for a first watercolor. The legs look particulary nice. I would, however, suggest working on your blending tecnique. I remember that this is pretty important from my art classes and you seem to change from shade to highlight too rapidly. Also work on your lighting a little bit (for example the breasts lack the roundness that they are supposed to have).
I'm by no means an expert at this so don't take my comments too seriously. Anyways, good work and keep it up.

[Axl]

I like the pic alot, the colour scheme and the mood reminds me of Yoshitaka Amano.
The way you've let the colour bleed in certain areas is good and I think that the wings may have looked better if they'd had the same technique applied to them.
One thing that ruins the piece for me is the uzi, it doesn't fit.

[::Dino::]

A succubus(?) holding an uzi doesn't work for me either...But overall I like it Good work. I personally havn't worked too much with watercolour, so I can't critique on technique. *(I'm a poet)*

[piter]

Thanks for the comments! I'll try to incorporate some of your suggestions into my next painting.

[piter]

This is my first real watercolour--needless to say, I had some problems, esp. with the wash.