[Evon]

my try on something different. I wish that it will look a little more scarier but end up looking a little too cartoony. :| can anyone gimme some tips and pointers??? <:|
*changed the eye a bit. was too far out just now. no one is going to give crits??



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evon
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[This message has been edited by Evon (edited April 13, 2001).]

[Evon]

no one's willing to give pointers? please do... Thankyou very much.

[Radiater]

Hey Evon,

I really like some of your texturing of the scales. However as you come to the front of the face, your pen strokes make the face look kind off hairy. Also, his teeth seem a little to bright, especially inside (maybe he flosses lots).

Also, based on where your light source appears to be it seems to dark under the nose. And finally, the contrast around the corner of the mouth is too much. It appears as though the side ot the mouth turns into the head.

Other things I like include the eye and the brow, as well as your light source. It gives an overall sinister look.

Hope that's helpful. Didn't want to let your post sink into oblivion with zero replies.

Radiater.

[PandaX52]

yeah, i think the texture is this image's strong point...it just looks kind of akward with the way the head is flying through space at what appears to be a zooming speed.

I think the lower neck part looks a bit weird and maybe it should just be the head zooming around.

keep it up.