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NeoFun
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| I did it in pencil, it was too big too scan, and my scanner made it a bit darker. Critiques? |
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SporQ
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:17 pm |
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| my first comment would be to post the actual pic =p |
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agent44
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:17 pm |
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I can't see it.
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NeoFun
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:20 pm |
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Wouldn't it be nice if I attached a picture?
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Holly Jolly
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:21 pm |
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I like how you said it was something, yet I see nothing, it does wonders for my toe. 
picture please. |
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NeoFun
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:33 pm |
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It works fine for me. I think Holly Jolly posted just as you put the pic up. I like this piece- the crispness of the shadows adds real depth.
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:42 pm |
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works fine here too..
I think its a beautiful rendering.. my only crit is those are big eyes... but maybe she really has that big of eyes... 
good job... shes cute... (but no i dont want her number)
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GreenPeach
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 1:44 pm |
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| Solid. but isn't she a little young to smoke? |
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minusthink
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 2:28 pm |
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I was under the impression that it was charocol in here mouth for somereason. She looks 'smudgey' like she was just doing a charocol drawing, herself. So if this was intended, its a bit subtle, and if it wasn't intended, I would smooth out the shading a bit I think.
Besides the above, the only other criticism have is that her head seems to be too big for her shoulders. Great job, that's talent, keep it up. |
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Chin
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 6:37 pm |
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Very nice work. I like the angle and the expression.
My only real crit is that the eyes are disproportionate. I like the one on the right (her left) better if I had to pick one  Dunno which is more realistic though. |
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Dthind
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 8:28 pm |
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Harsh and real... Not sure what else to say.
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Dean Welsh
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 10:00 pm |
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Beauty!
Sorry, not much more to say about it.
-Dean |
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