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XandGash
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 5:07 am     Reply with quote
Here is a pin-up I did for my studio's book. From pencils to color, it took 36 hours.

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swampbug
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 5:21 am     Reply with quote
I especially like the character in the front. Way cool character design. The only thing hindering this picture's effectiveness is its layout. Too much action is drifting off the right side of the image. (ie the mans face, and the wizard-dude's hand. I can understand its to late to really change anything, but a note to keep in mind for another day. Good job.
-tom
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mantis
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 5:38 am     Reply with quote
overall the pic looks good but there are a few problems. the face in the background has a red collar, but the collar goes nowhere. The colouring-style for the rock does not match the rest of the pic. I would make the robe of the magi less shiny, it attracts too much attention. The cat-figure in the front is great, nice colours, same with the magi except for his robe, it's too shiny.
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mantis
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 5:40 am     Reply with quote
overall the pic looks good but there are a few problems. the face in the background has a red collar, but the collar goes nowhere. The colouring-style for the rock does not match the rest of the pic. I would make the robe of the magi less shiny, it attracts too much attention. The cat-figure in the front is great, nice colours, same with the magi except for his robe, it's too shiny. btw - that tacky gold border really makes it look cheesy, I would personally take it out. Always remember that mixing 3d and 2-d comic art is very difficult and usually comes out bad.
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XandGash
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 8:15 am     Reply with quote
The collar is not my doing. It's part of the design. I told the guys at the studio that it doesn't work, but they said to keep it in.
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stneil777
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 3:02 pm     Reply with quote
yes, the orange guy is dope man.
i love that one.
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mellowsmoothe
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 3:16 pm     Reply with quote
i would crit. the cat dude. even though he is done well, it seems that his leg is bent out in an unnatural fashion. if it isnt then it might need more definition.
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Tyson Allen
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 6:57 pm     Reply with quote
36hrs!? Need to work on speed dude....damn
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XandGash
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 7:21 pm     Reply with quote
I was a slow inker and colorist back then. I've gotten faster since then.
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