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washishoto
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 4:00 am     Reply with quote
Hello everyone, i am new at posting in this forum ,lots of people here are my heros (loki,sppoge demon, vejborn spelling? , liquid, enayla etc),
and this is my first try in photoshop,.
i know its bad,.. but plz give me crits so i can improve =D
(ps. its a mouse drawing)
[img:4c328168b5] ]http://www.geocities.com/b_z_o_n_e/first.jpg[/img]

http://www.geocities.com/b_z_o_n_e/first.jpg

Thanks!
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washishoto
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 4:10 am     Reply with quote
need to copy and paste in a new browser!

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washishoto
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 6:24 pm     Reply with quote
thx frost =D

yer also one of my hero =D


thx for the comments!
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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 8:22 pm     Reply with quote
*nod* the edge of the hair looks good. The face has a lotta different levels of opacity on it .. try to get it smoothed out like frost said.. and, you may want to try to get the cheekbone higher.
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Frost
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2001 11:20 pm     Reply with quote
I like the hair, but it's rather messy and undetailed in general, sorry. The skin looks covered with black ashes or something, so maybe cleaning that up and using more proper colors and values (better use of dark/light).
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