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Fallen · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 2:41 pm

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Looks nice Fallen. Do you want a crit?

Frost · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 3:34 pm

Yes, nice. Indeed tell us if you want critiques -- it can only help...

burn0ut · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 3:46 pm

ah damn i was expecting some shoes...

owell VERYNICE

SoMK · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 3:48 pm

Whether you want crits or not.. I LIKE IT !:))

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zero21 · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 3:54 pm

Damn man that is sooooooo like my exwife it's not funny, No shit, the hair is the same as she had a few years back and everything. (Except the tatto on the leg, ok I lied a little there).
The likeness is amazing. Once I get over the fright I will go check the restraining order is still in place.

Oh Yeah artwork, ummm . . . . , Apart from the actual subject all is cool and I like it.
(going to set the alarm now, but keep up the good work!!)

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Haha no shoes!.

Excellent *rubs hands*

Dthind · member Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436

Impressive !

Fallen · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 5:35 pm

Critique away.

I gotta remember to type that in the heading like everyone else.

(edit: uh, dont mind the hair, i just noticed it was off black. I fixed the original but the image posted will just stay the same.)
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root88 · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 7:58 pm

The face looks really flat compared to the rest of the pic. Love all your stuff though.

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

Excellent. I really like her nose.

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Lunatique · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 9:30 pm

Nice.

The only thing I would say is that the contrast in her hair is a bit mild compared to the rest, especially her black top. I'd probably darken the darkest parts in her hair.

Fallen · Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 10:07 pm

Ok, i couldn't stand it..i fixed the hair.

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BooMSticK · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 2:37 am

Nice pic Fallen. I have nothing to crit on the girl, but the background is not very good. You have like four different shades in each corner wich makes the background far too busy and makes it take attention away from the main thing - the girl. Also the area in the topleft corner looks dirty and blurred. A simplier background would do the girl much more justice... Just my thinking. Otherwise a very nice pic, as usual. Love the way you shaded that rubber-top she's wearing...
,Boom

Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Heh.. that is all I was going to say. Fix the hair.

Frost · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 9:16 am

Hey Fallen. =)

Like I said previously, this is nice, as always. However, some things sort of upset me in the images you do, and, that could be considered a style or design that maybe needs no touching up, but, I tend to think that the elements just don't blend well together at all, almost like a collage. For instance, the ambiant light here is purpleish-red in a dark value, and yet the skin on her is very light and very "pasted on top" looking. Areas where direct light isn't affecting the girl should be lit by the environment by bounce light, and concave areas such as the cracks between her toes and all should be made darker (at least, so it is in reality) because of the little amount of light (direct or indirect) reaching those areas.

Again, this could be a style thing and you may not want anything to do to it, which is fine, but, I think that your cleanliness and meticulousness (isn't that an odd word) would serve a better purpose doing something that has more range and depth to it. That's just my personal oppinion.

Good work,
frost.

topeira · Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 11:23 pm

besdies that i think it's missing a stronger contrast on the body like u have on the leather it's excellent! oh, feet seem too big. probably cuz of the foreshortening but still... lil weird.

but excellent pic like your other great stuff

and please next time u post somethign, i would LOVE to see the reference pic with your own pic. just to compare.
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Seph|roth · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 12:17 am

Hey really excellent work there !

However I have to agree that there is a lack of contrast in you image.
But thats about all that I cant think of !

Good job

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Spring · Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 1:21 pm

Her breasts seem a little low on her chest. Unless she just has larg saggy breasts