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Seraphire
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 Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 4:30 pm |
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Pencils: Kaz. Inks: Serge a.k.a Slap.
Colors: You know.
This is final. Mistakes, as is.
Chris is a judge, so he can't really post I guess. But I'd still like to hear everyone else's opinions. What do I have to watch out for next time?
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Periadam
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 4:34 pm |
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very cool. I like it.
I just wish that that background was more detailed than just the gradient.
good work though 
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Seraphire
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 8:19 pm |
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I figured it was busy enough as is. I didn't want to draw attention away from the character and action in the foreground. And I felt the minimal background and upper left corner, counter-balanced the busy lower right and foreground.
Make sense to anyone but me?
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Chapel
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 8:43 pm |
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| Looks great seraphire. Knock em dead! |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 8:55 pm |
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real nice bro, reminds me of this wildcats comic hmm very nice indeed, colors are great
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 8:56 pm |
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real nice bro, reminds me of this wildcats comic hmm very nice indeed, colors are great
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Lomi
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| Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 10:28 pm |
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| very coo, but that left arm on the robot thing..... is it a chainsaw? and if it is why is the whole thing blurred that way? only the chain on a chainsaw rotates |
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Seraphire
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2001 7:01 am |
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I think the motion is supposed to be denoting, that it is moveing forward too. I guess. I also noticed that the chain on a saw, goes the other way. It was draw to pull on the upper portion. Chainsaws, pull on the lower side, to get more torque. I colored it as it was drawn. But technically, the saw should be pulling to cut through the cement(Now it is pushing), and the sparks would then be coming in, not out. But I wasn't going to counter the pencillers work. That would have been even more confusing.
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Chapel
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| Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2001 7:04 am |
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| I don't think that is supposed to be a chainsaw. Looks to me like it was supposed to be the second tread. I'm not sure though. This is the transmorph tank from WildCATS #1 the second series. |
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2001 3:15 pm |
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| remind me of wildcats/and or dead pool |
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