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bellie
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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 10:47 pm |
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hello everybody! well ... even though the pic isnt a boy on a throne, that is what it was meant to be at the start, and it just slowly changed to this.
ive spent too much time on this, even though i know its really bad, but its the only decent pic (i think) ive been able to get out of fotoshop. this is about all im able to do with the pic.. [edit] but its far from finished, please help me . esp with the water its too flat, i couldnt draw waves  [/edit]
any crits would be much much appreciated, and rip it to pieces please! draw overs would be much appreciated..  thankyou very much
-btw thanx a lot freddio
oh i also have one question.. is it bad to start with an idea in your head and then it changes as you draw? because all my puictures i draw in fotoshop usually change .. ? thanx a lot everybody! much appreciated
[This message has been edited by bellie (edited February 12, 2001).] |
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topeira
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:37 pm |
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oh man, dont be so harsh on yourself. it's not bad as u might think. u can add more vertical lines to the couch in the upper part of it, more black parts to the pants and get the pink stain on the couch outta there. for the water u can add a rough reflection of the couch and figure and vertical lines for the feeling of the water. make those lines brighter or yellow on the right side of the picture as if it's a reflection of the yellow light. i dont like the sharp change between the yello sunrise like lightning in the right and the night on the left. it's a bit wierd. and the stars should be just dots, not so much of a cross.
but the atmosphere is very good. don't change it.
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PandaX52
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:40 pm |
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| that really isnt too bad, not to offend anyone, but there has been worse things posted here before... |
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shahar2k
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| Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 7:57 pm |
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reminds me of "The little price"
dunno if anyone read that book....
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bellie
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| Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2001 4:35 am |
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hey thanx for the replies sorry for boosting my own topic but i really want some critz, sorry if im being a poo.
-topeira- well yeah i took those comments into mind, i dont think i have enough time to even draw anything for this week so ill try your suggestions topeira.
-shahar2k- sorry never heard of that book ill keep a lookout for it
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