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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:08 pm |
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I'm going to be wimpish and ask you not to rip this picture apart. I'm just so tired.
Yesterday the computer crashed and ate this picture. I had to finish it tonight.
Luckily, I had a version from two days ago, as well as a smaller version (about 800 pixels high) that I enlarged, blurred, and then used to base the picture on. Anyway... with that said... I'm actually pretty pleased with the end result:
(edit) replaced the picture with the latest version... Duh... sometimes I'm so stupid.
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[This message has been edited by Enayla (edited January 31, 2001).] |
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Krazy member
Member # Joined: 09 Dec 2000 Posts: 238 Location: MI, US
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:12 pm |
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wow...wow wit a moment while i roll my toung back into my mouth and whip up all the drool....another great one...i love it ...everything bout it the color the mood its great as everything else you do is ...since your so much better at this stuff than i am i cant give any critique but im sure some one will... have a good day keep em coming ...man i love it  |
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]|V|[ERLIN member
Member # Joined: 05 Nov 2000 Posts: 56
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:13 pm |
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KINDA COOL!
I REALLY LIKE!
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neebhore member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 330 Location: UK
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:25 pm |
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I really like that, especially the hair, and the half skull face, superb... |
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SlightlyTwisted member
Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2000 Posts: 436 Location: Oslo, Norway
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:27 pm |
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Wahoo! See, I knew it would come out well, in the end. And what an end! It's gorgeous!
Ehhh... what to say? I feel like whatever I say, I'll just be repeating what I've already told you. Suffice it to say that I love this picture. Each time you've shown me a newer version, it's somehow managed to get even more amazing. All the little details you've added to it keep on enhancing the beauty you never fail to capture. And to think that you were so worried about it. A job so much more than well done!  |
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Zor member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 198 Location: UK
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 5:12 pm |
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Wooh! cor blimy guv!! thats very neat... really enjoyed your hair.. it is great! (hmm that came out all wrong hehe)....so I wont tell you what else I enjoy about it...*ahem : )
Very good.. I love this style please please do some more of this.. maybe a bit bigger would be nice... keep it up
-zor
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Wyatt Turner member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 501 Location: Everett, WA, USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 5:53 pm |
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girlz and there purplez...
Cool and evil babe!
y@ |
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 6:20 pm |
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Nothing to rip apart It's pretty amazing I think. You did a wonderful job on the skin texture and hair. And the faces are very life like. Very nice. |
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Waldo member
Member # Joined: 01 Aug 2000 Posts: 263 Location: Irvine, CA
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 6:22 pm |
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Very interesting piece. No rip, but may I offer a suggestion? Perhaps subtly defining the planes a bit more between his wrist and hand. It gets lost with hers. Also maybe smoothing up and toning down the ribs. The hair is exquisite as always and I really like the lighting on his face. Love the colors, too.
Sorry to hear of your computer woes. I, along with most everyone else can certainly empathize...
Now get some rest. Good job!  |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 9:07 pm |
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Wheeeh! Glad to hear nobody hates her (and him)
The ribs are supposed to be "not-smooth"... I was very aware of what I was doing when I drew them like that
Gods, I'm tired... what the hell am I doing up! *mutters and crawls back into bed*
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Visigoth Guest
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 11:16 pm |
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Ahhh! Another awesome one from Enayla!
One suggestion though...
Her left nipple is turned too far to the left... At that position, it would be turning slightly more towards the front of the body...
Great image though! I love the use of color.
Is it just my imagination, or do half the women out there draw breasts uber-perky (not huge, just way too perky)...?
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 2:20 am |
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Visigoth: Thanks! You're probably right about her nipple, but I'm really too sick and tired of the picture now to change it. Maybe later...
... it all depends on the guy I drew it for. For all I know, he might want me to cover the nipples anyway since it's going to be on a book cover :/
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Socar MYLES member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 1229 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 8:10 am |
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You've got me with this one...I'm a real sucker for the morbidly fascinating, as you know...adore that emerging skull. As always, all the little things are in place--it's polished, stylish, and compelling. I won't rip it apart. The only thing I could possibly say in even a slightly negative vein is that the lower portions of the lady's torso and arm look a little flat. I know they're fading into the shadows, but they're still three-dimensional.... But then, what do I know? I haven't drawn anything remotely human in weeks!
I'll stop quibbling now, though, and go back to admiring the smooth sweep of the hair, the subtle shadowing of the flesh...the gaping eyesocket....
Can't wait for your next one. |
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Socar MYLES member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 1229 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 5:12 pm |
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Me, too! Congratulations on the book cover, that is. I didn't realize what it was for at first! WAY TO GO! *Hugs* And I never, EVER hug people. |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 5:34 pm |
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Congratulations!! How exciting!!
-Beth
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DirtyDigger member
Member # Joined: 09 Dec 2000 Posts: 115 Location: NutSac, California
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 10:52 pm |
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That simply can't be put into words...I was very happy seeing your art on that book cover. I just love seeing people succeed so much.
Whooohoo good job!!
*dances the jig of joy*
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 12:15 am |
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Socar: You are probably very right about that I'm too lazy to change it right now though... thanks for the crits!!
As to the image... wheeeeh... jackpot!!
http://www.imaginary-worlds.com/books/heart-prev.html
Just a small thing, I know... but it's my first one.
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SlightlyTwisted member
Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2000 Posts: 436 Location: Oslo, Norway
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 12:40 am |
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I know I've said it a few times already, but CONGRATULATIONS!!!
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 2:22 am |
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I'm so happy!!
*beams*
Thanks everyone! *tosses hugs around*
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(And who wants to leave buttprints in the sands of time?) |
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Danny member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2000 Posts: 386 Location: Alcyone, Pleiadians
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 3:51 am |
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Woooohooo! Way to go Enayla!
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Dthind member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 7:15 am |
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Enayla, this is... well... as always, very good. It is creepy though (in a good way). It has that 'be careful what you wish for' kind of scary thing going on (if that makes any sense) |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 12:24 am |
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Danny: Thanks!
Dthind: I am very glad to hear that since that was practically was I was aiming for! Thanks
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