[Periadam]

This is the first thing in a while that I've been able to finish. *sigh* I'm pretty happy with it, but I'm probably gonna add some colour veriations to it later and make a bit more detail in the lower body.



I was wondering mostly about the anatomy? everything seem in order? I've been trying to work on that lately.

crits welcome.

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Peri.

[MrHiemey]

as far as anatomy goes, you're fine except that the collar bone isn't that thick usually(especially on women) and the nipple looks really off, maybe too much highlights or in the wrong spot, but there is a lot of variation in that in nature anyhow, so it could be fine.
Looks great overall, I like the lighting a lot. post the variations if you can.

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[synj]

gravity where are you?

[Frost]

The breast are too high up... not too big. Adding a silhouette line for her ribcage and higher abdomen would also help.

[DirtyDigger]

Nipple needs to move closer to the end of the breast (although not right on it) and as mentioned above the breast is too high. she has no upper chest.

Like the lighting though.

Reminds me of this pic of me



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[Periadam]

Thanks a lot people I knew there was something screwy about that breast

MrHiemey: I thought there was something weird about the collarbone too. thanks

synj: I dunno... where are her clothes?

Frost: Thanks. You're right

DirtyDigger: Yep yep, you're also right. I attempted to fix that. And cool pic



I tried to fix what you all were talking about, and I added a bit of green into it. Think it works?


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I can please only one person per day. Today is not your day, and tomorrow isn't looking good either.

Peri.

[Dan]

well, just looking at my own anatomy. I think the collar bone sticks out at the top but it doesn't come back in as much. Sorta like a rounded ledge. and something about that chin bugs me. Maybe it just seems to round or something. Well either way, good pic

[Eshara]

The nipple is fine in the 2nd version. Her collar bone is way off though. It should align with her shoulder and not disappear in the background. everything else seems fine. At least thats what I think.

[Krazy]

hehe hmmm maybe make the nipple like the nose like right at the tip just a suggestion oh and i love th ecolor it is gives it a really moody feel

[twisted]

I agree about the collar bone, I think it should be a little lower.

I also agree about the nipple, it should be in profile at the very tip of the breast. I think it might also help if it wasn't so round and if it sort of pointed forward. Also if you showed where it attached to the body it wouldn't look like it's dripping off of her neck.

Just my opinion, from what I can remember about female anatomy, if you know what I mean, hehe.

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