[poxen]

grrrr.....

[MeatyCheesyBoy]

I like the way the picture is turning out but I'm not really sure it belongs in the finished forum, it seems more like a work in progress. You didn't ask for any critiques but I'm going to give you some anyway. Hope you don't mind.



#1 There is a part between the shoulder and the bicep that has a highlight on it that makes it stick up higher then it should.

#2 The is yellow at the top of the emblem where the 's' curls up.

#3 This on is purely my opinion, but I think you may have gone a little too dark with the shadow areas, it makes superman look a little more sinister than he should.

If you continue to work on it, I'd love to see it, I love Superman.

[poxen]

hay hay..
here is my latest pic..
found some old superman magazines in a box when i was hunting for inspiration today.

Here it is.
I like the face, which i concentrated mostly on..but the cap is a bit unfinished...
jeje..


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[This message has been edited by poxen (edited January 09, 2001).]

[poxen]

MeatyCheesyBoy- Thx..yea maybe is dosn�t belong here, i belive i hurry to much.
I will post it in the work in progress sesion...
and i wrote in the topic [crit], so thats what i want! =)

1# hmm..ok, yea it looks kinda wierd.
2# ohh...didn�t se that...thx
3# hmm...yea you probley right, have that problem on many off my pics..

Thx!

[poxen]

Go to work in progress instead!
This pic is in the worng sesion..=)

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