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SplitSoul · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:06 pm

Hmm. Trying something new.

-Split

Ragnarok · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:26 pm

Well, I think you have improved, but still IMHO you lack a good composition. It's too chaotic, the eyes go up and down, left and right and don't find any guides, any paths to look.
Hope this helps.

SplitSoul · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:40 pm

I know what you mean. It was more of an experiment than anything else.

-Split

Akolyte · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:19 pm

Damn, they make birds bigger everyday, and I just washed my windshield

grr...

I like the colors, but not the overall construction...It's lacking a focal point, I think.

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Anthony · Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:31 pm

I agree with Rag - in an abstract picture the composition is of the utmost import. It's what seperates "good" abstract from "random."

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SplitSoul · Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 3:06 am

Up we go.

-Split

Spitfire · Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 3:51 am

Why bump? The system is accurate enough.

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-- Transcendent -- · Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 4:08 am

No, I don't like abstracts, but I do like this one - it has a surreal quality to it all - like a camara placed to the belly of a man with a transparent stomach, quite disturbing, if I might add.

good stuff.