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cptoonz
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 16, 2002 6:57 pm     Reply with quote
Well, some of you may have seen Cheri's thread and this is a character that will either be an antagonist, or a protagonist, I ain't sure yet, but I am working on the concept description still...C&C is welcome

*scroll on down for new drawing and description*

first drawing

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 16, 2002 10:21 pm     Reply with quote
Try something different with the hair. Maybe bring the chestiness down a little. All together damn good though.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 6:48 pm     Reply with quote
thanks bld, appreciate it...I worked the hair a bit...read her description below and see if the rackidge isn't more "plausible" *ahem*

Suki the Succubus,
She's a super powered devil/succubus chic.
"Fun Bag Fwallop"- lethal "boob torpedo" charge type attack.
"Boob Congo Bongo"- rythmic stun attack at point blank range.
"Whip Tail Tangler"- trips an opponent leaving them vulneralble to the "FBF".
"Whip Tail Strike"- yep, she beat's the snot out of you with.
"Lavish Tounge Lip Lick"- standard charm.
"Throw the Leg Panty Shot"- special power
Once the target gets an irresitable eyeful, they are automatically rendered motionless, forced to fumble with their pants.
Patented Pelvic Thrust follow up- induces irresistable surges of lustful passion forceing targets to get a "handle on things in private" (particularly effective against male opponents).
Suki is a little more aggressive and sexually oriented than Cheri. Suki's a succubus, after all. Suki prefers ranged attack (whip tail) and attacks that favor her speed (FBF) to close in meelee. She prefers to subdue an opponent before closing in "for the kill" or for whatever it is she has planned for the hapless sod. Cheri just wants everybody to be happy! YAY!

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 10:18 pm     Reply with quote
I vote antoganist. I wouldn't want to be around her.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 6:44 pm     Reply with quote
I uploaded over the last drawing, just some minor tweakeage...going ink/color, next

Alpha_Meta,
Thanks for the vote and post! Noted
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 12:55 am     Reply with quote
finger positions look un-real, her left hand to me looks odd..
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 1:05 am     Reply with quote
Or she could be a sweet girl and I'm getting her all wrong. I'd be afraid of putting my eyes out on her horns if we were - you know. It's not a good idea to do that with a demon anyway, even Ryoko - she'd lose control of her power and blow you up if you got her there.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 4:44 pm     Reply with quote
B0b,

Thanks for the C&C, but the left hand of which figure would you be refering to?

Alpha_Meta ,

mmmhh, she's no sweety...you've got her pegged, yep, doing demons is generally unhealthy
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 5:45 pm     Reply with quote
she looks kinda burly, as if she contains traces of "man" in her
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 2:02 am     Reply with quote
oh sorry m8, the larger pic, the fingers look kinda forced rather than in a natrual pose..
prehaps she could b holding her tail and licking the tip?

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 4:14 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for checkin' back B0b. I'll see what I can do about that hand, it is a bit stiff...OOoooO...the patented tail tip lick? I like it!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 1:17 am     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by cptoonz:
the patented tail tip lick? I like it!


yes is patent No. 23300330303
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 2:34 am     Reply with quote
Excellent!

They remind me of Sedusa & Angelissa from Azimuth Design just more demony.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 25, 2002 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for postin' lads

B0b, is that your patent? Whoever has it is probably makin' a mint!

Hiya, Andy! Thanks man, much appreciated Oooh, those links are cool! Heh, I bookmarked the webpage...he sure has a neat style
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