[Svanur]

I've been working on this pic for 2 hours now(over 2 days) and it's mostly a study and practice on using 2 strong, different light sources.

If you see anything wrong with it, let me know, better to fix something before it's finished.



Thanks.

edit: the red glowing dot was just a focus point to help me establish the point where the light came from and won't probably be in the final picture.

[ May 22, 2002: Message edited by: Svanur ]

[zak]

my anatomy is probably one of the worst around here, but i still did a really really quick paintover to show where you might have went wrong. also you need to make sure that you give the chest a bit more definition, a bit more shape, it looks quite flat as it is. these are my 2 cents

[Svanur]

yes, he has that kind of shoujo(or whatever the word was) look to it. He was much slimmer in the chest area before I posted here, but added some weight. Still looking slim but not as slim as before.

The problem I see now is mostly the bicep(I think I am naming the right muscle, hehe) on his right arm, it's too much of a bulge.

[PixelPeZ]

'shoujo' is a manga, japanese comic, directed to girls so I guess that wasn't the word you meant