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jabber member
Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 235 Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada
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Posted: Mon May 06, 2002 11:43 pm |
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bif naked. i like her. i drew her. then i stopped. cause something is wrong. and i know not what. help me please. danka.
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Basement bound member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2001 Posts: 874 Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 4:53 pm |
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I think that it is the nose and her right eye region. once some more detail is in the hair and cloths you will find it pull together more.
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cptoonz member
Member # Joined: 22 Mar 2001 Posts: 243 Location: CO
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 8:10 pm |
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I agree with Basement...in addition, you may want to create a little more facial-curvature-contour on the right side (viewer's left) of her face...the straightness you have there leapt out at me. really cool, though, all around...nice, cool mood, very Gothic...I like it! Look forward to the finish  |
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PixHortHiT member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 268 Location: The part of sweden closer to hell
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2002 1:14 am |
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the hand seems a bit short and chubby..... Danke |
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