[NiM]

Did a quick sketch, scanned it and painted the outlines... The start of a new pic i guess


c&c expected

[Rogelio Olguin]

not experianced enough but I do see somethings wrong just visually...

the right leg is very twisted especially since you added the foot in the left part makes me imagine that she is crossed legged... looks odd and she could even be in a lot of pain in that postion. the right foot is a little wide for a lady... hands need work the fingers do not look like fingers but stubby the face is ok but the hair line you put makes the head look longer than it is ment to be.

That is the technical part... now the artistic part... just suggestion maybe put a bed covering over her right leg slighty showing here tip of the foot and going across behind here butt slighty covering the middle of the butt cheeks a bit... like half and going in the middle of the arm and butt area to the end of the bed going up... that might make it more dramatic and itnresting to see...

Artistic part is just a little more opinion but hey just trying to help

the pose is pretty intresting but needs work

another thing is the windows... maybe having a view of vietnam type houses... or maybe in that villege areas.. but this looks like it was more of the city areas more urban than small towns... from the suggestion of the window.

sorry for such a long rant lol

[NiM]

Havnt really had any time to wrk on this but well, i did a few changes and added some base colors...



Changed her look to something more classy.. removed the 'tip of the foot' that was coming out from to the left of the body added the cover that was just a sketchy concept in the beginning.. Thanks for the tips Rogelio Gonna have to change the bit covering her foot though, doesntlook good...

The hands suck, i just never can do them right.. i guess sooner or later i'll learn how to do them properly

c&c, paintovers, anything really, it's all welcome

[Rogelio Olguin]

np

yeah with out that foot to the right it looks loads better and the cover slightly hiding the butt area is good also

the hands like you said need work.. those hands look a little stubby like a mans hands just get some clothing mags and look at the hands on the ladies that is the quickest refrance possible besides getting books of atonomy and looking on the net

base colors are ok now just keep it going

you also fixed the hair which makes it look tons better. everything else is ok. the hands are the only part that needs work. but you know that already

[Basse_Ex]

I think you have some major anatomical problems, that won't be straightened out by just fixing small things here and there.
You should redo the sketch of the girl, starting with the bones, then the general twisting of the muscles, and finally do the contour....(Also do the bones and muscles for the parts you won't see in the picture)

See, you've selected a pretty damn'd hard pose to draw, and... well... you need a damn'd good sketch in order to make it work. I see that you've done some type of basic sketching, but for so many twisting and contorting joints you need to really work things out in the initial stages.

I'd suggest printing the figure out in bluelines(Or other lightly colored lines) and going over it with a pencil.

Cuz, really... that's a damn'd hard pose you've picked.

[NiM]

K, i printed it, worked on it together with my 'Dynamic Anatomy' book and here's where it got me



indeed it is a very difficult pose to draw.. i guess that's what makes me want to do it..

C&C and paintovers appreciated... My eye for anatomy isnt that good so please point out the details...

[ May 03, 2002: Message edited by: NiM ]

[NiM]

Had to move the pics to another service since the 'other' ones closed down... well, her t is again, at least the lates one..�tell me wat i'm doing wrong here... :/