[BASTION]

As the crits were so helpful in improving my last character concept I thought I'd try my luck again and see what you guys thought about this one.

Any advice on anatomy, proportions, style, design costume etc. (you get the picture) would be greatly appreciated. This is a first draft for the character so I will make an effort to use any good advice for the final.



thanks

[Five Iron Skillet]

Looks great! But seems to me that her holster for her weapons could be very dangerous to her health.

[BASTION]

The design for the sheaths was also brought up on another board so I better explain how they work...

The head of each weapon folds down against the shaft, similar to a camping shovel. Then when folded down, the blade of the weapon and the shaft would fit firmly into the sheaths, with the handles out of the top and sticking out above each shoulder. She would draw the weapons then give them a flick to extend the blades.