[Arc][Pello]

Hey there, i just need a little help before i start to do the major work on this picture.
all i want is for you guys to give advice and crits.thanx

[Arc][Pello]

Thanx walkear, but again shes not standing up, shes crouched down and leaning up against the wall. ive tried the pose myslef adn ive noticed that its the right leg need to be more vertical. anyway ill keep working on it.

[Mr. T]

right leg?

[Axl]

What you have already looks good but I think that her front arm looks a little bendy, it needs a sharper point where the elbow is.
Also, does she have her back up against the wall because if so then I think that the back leg doesn't look right tucked up the way it is. It looks as though she may fall over.
One last thing I've just noticed and that is the armour/body, I wouldn't make it look too shiney as it may stand out too much compared with the rest of the picture.

[Arc][Pello]

actaully she is crouched down and up against the wall thats why the right leg is down like that for support, still need to work on it though. yeah the left arm is a bit bending, and do you think the forarm is too long, im not too sure.

[Walkaer]

yeah, her pose seems to defy gravity -- if she's leaning against a wall, she should be falling forwards. You may want to reconsider the positioning of her left (our right) leg.

Perhaps like so?



or not <shrug>

The hair looks quite good.

[ March 04, 2002: Message edited by: Walkaer ]