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Levijuice · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 11:26 am

Hi, this is my old work that I was trying to enhance in photoshop.

I feel that something doesnt work there, probably composition?

I will be thankfull for every comment..

Sukhoi · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 3:02 pm

I must say that I like the old, clean one better!

I think it's way too messy.

But I shure like the robot, it's an old classic as far as I'm concerned (wallpaper top 10

)!!

Sukhoi

Levijuice · Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2002 2:21 am

Thanks Sukhoi,
I am glad you use it as an wallpaper

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However "clean one" was quite empty with no background for me..

What about this one?
Will it help if I clean texture and fire in front of mech and keep it only in background?

jesusclone · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 1:10 pm

well I'm new here so I haven't seen the original, but this looks sweet man!. Some advice though, lose the eyecandy fire and the text. Maybe draw in some fire yourself, I hate the way eyecandy fire looks though, very distinguishable as such

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Levijuice · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 3:17 pm

Thanx Jesus clone

, I will think about that eye candy fire.

Here is the original "clean version" do you have some idea about background?

You know I like the way mech look however I feel that without background its incomplete

PixHortHiT · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 12:18 am

It would go well with some �kind of wall behind it, be careful of what filters you use tough...

Levijuice · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 2:22 am

Thanx PixHortHiT,

I am quite new in 2D and Photoshop, can you please write me more about how to use filters right?

Fabrys · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 2:35 am

Wow ! What a Mech !! I didn't understand if you are the 3D artist who made it or not.
Can you give it other positions ? Like jumping to the camera and make your picture more dynamic ? You would have more maneuver to create a final compo.

If you cannot change the mech's position, why to not try such an advert screen ? Or, such a jungle real-battle field ?
PS : I've watched your site, your pics look great !!

Levijuice · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 2:46 am

Thanx for great ideas ,
about mech : Its my work that I created years ago in old ZBrush so only parts are 3D and I can not rotate him unfortunately...

Since creation I feel that he is incomplete and I am trying to do something with it

I am not very good in English, "Advert Screen" means Mirroring or some kind of "Beware Mechs sign" ? Please explain