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Usagi
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here is an i dea for a manga i created. . .i have yet to make a real story line as of yet and would like comments on this before i go any farther. . . thanks alot
usagi
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tek9z
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| Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2002 3:34 am |
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the ninja and the kendo dude
are very cool!
well chosen body-proportions !
love to see a story on all these characters
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lalPOOO
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| Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:58 pm |
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| that looks promising! I would deffintly go ahead, hell that could be a tv show, all you'd have to do is make their mouths open and close and them be able to shake alot and you've got another pokermen rip off |
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lalPOOO
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| Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:59 pm |
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sorry if i sound negative I'm actauly not, i just have somthing against bad anime (WHICH YOUR ISN'T!!!!)
damn it, I should go to bed before I start making even less sense... |
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Dr. Bang
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| Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2002 9:37 pm |
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| HAHAHAHAAHA CUTE!!!!! More!!!!! |
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Usagi
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:46 am |
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thanks. . i like the kendo guy too my fave is the naganata guy! ha!
usagi
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Usagi
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 6:19 pm |
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you like?
thats awsome!!! good to hear cause i have a story now. . kinda. . .
wooden dog prelude . . entitled . . . "Foreshadows"
a ninja was in china to assassinate a leader of a clan. after killing the leader, gaurds noticed the presence of the ninja. he soon fled and while running and hiding he was spotted by some women and killed them. one of the women had a baby. feeling regret for taking innocent lives the ninja took the baby and returned to japan. he decides to live in the mountains and raise the kid as a ninja. the ninja tatood "dog" on the child to degrade him. he told the boy that is all he will ever be unless he proves himself worthy of a more honorable name. so the boy accepted the the challange and began training. when he was finally able to choose a new name, the boy chose "wooden dog" because it was the toy he had as a baby when he was taken by the ninja.
here is the possible story to why he is a ninja. . tell me what you think. . this would be a "preview manga" of the story. . .
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jasonN
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 8:56 pm |
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Tee hee!
I rekon it sounds good, but I'm not much of a writer :P
Anyway, I just wanted to say that your characters look really great and I REALLY think you should try animating them. I forsee an awesome cartoon.
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