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5cents
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 Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2001 11:52 pm |
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this is a P 51 mustang pilot from ww2.I think the eyes look slightly skewd but what do you think? I dont go to art school so I need the crit |
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Shiro_tengu
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 12:14 am |
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looks like you dont need to. Nice pic  |
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Manik Monkei
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 1:41 am |
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I like this. There are some screwy things with the face i.e. portions higher on one side than the other, but it definitely has personality.
If anything I'd say fix his cheek bones.. his left side (viewer's right) seems much lower.
I'd like to see this more complete. Hope you'll keep updating it.
[ November 30, 2001: Message edited by: Manik Monkei ] |
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Sukhoi
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| Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 6:17 am |
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He loks like a guy I know...
It looks like he has a lot of mixed emotions, very nicely done. I'd say keep adding black, but remember the inbetween tones aswell.
Good job.
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Solayna
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| Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 1:17 pm |
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His eyes are a bit disturbing but overall he looks like he really is something
Not just one of those generic beautiful people - he has personality. Deepen the shading and this will look great |
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5cents
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| Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 8:22 pm |
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| thanks for the crit,when I finish it ill post again |
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