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SWANY · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 3:51 am

I was starting to add some color to the pic, when all of a sudden, i found that i'm not good at coloring, i did the hair alright for my first go at hair, and also the fur came out good, but i stuffed the skin up pretty bad and her face sucks now. maybe i'll have to redo the skin. I think one of those wacom thingymabobs would come in handy

here's what it looks like, i have to change the bottom half because robert told me too

I just took out the face, and all of a sudden it looks alright, it would be easier if we had no faces, does someone want to draw me a face?........NO, actually, I comand you to draw me a face

I've gotten sick of this, what do you think

HOPEFULLY THE IMAGE SHOWS ON THE REPLY DOWN THIS THREAD

[ December 03, 2001: Message edited by: SWANY ]

Sukhoi · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 9:16 am

Hehe, Hi Swany.

It looks to me like you need to draw some basic forms into her head and face. You know, the good ol' geometry, cubes, triangles and spheres.
Do you know what I mean?? I'm too lazy to illustrate right now....

Sukhoi

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tdl · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 9:41 am

Hello,

I'd also make you a pen sketch, but I should be at class right about in, oh 2 minutes.

Anyway, draw a center line down through her face, that'll help you position the forehead (which you have moved to the left). Also, she's noseless! bring out that nose a bit farther from her face. It's also getting a bit flat towards the mouth area.

I believe that with subtle changes you can make that face really shine. It's just a matter of getting things symmetrical and modeling the forms a bit more.

sincerely,

SWANY · Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2001 4:21 pm

Easy for you all to say, but i dont have a tablet, which puts me at a disadvantage, i did do the line thing, but probably wasn't very carefull about it. I'll try the cube, triange, sphere stuff, all I wanted a sweet looking face. i don't want a shitty one, because i'll never be happy with the pic. I hate drawing!

By the way i did command you to draw a face for me!

Thanx for the comments guys

Little Beefucker · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 3:31 am

Having trouble accessing the picture, but if you'd like my two cents, I'm way into faceless body form art. Puts emphasis on body ratio, not sex appeal (well, that too, depending on just what you're drawing), and keeps the work vaguely artsy without having to try too hard.

This pretty much pulls the rug from under my own work -- I can't draw faces for thbbpp! But that's the thing. More fun having no features, IMO.

Solayna · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 3:36 am

I think you should highlight the nose a bit to make it stand out more. I really like the dark, intensive eyes... But the lips/chin look akward. Maybe the mouth is drawn from a slightly different angle, I don't know. The hair has really nice texture, though. Just the kind of rough texture that suits the character ^^ Oh, And if you want a sweeter face, try brighter eyes and lips... But I think the colours are fine the way they are. Huntresses aren't supposed to look TOO sweet *heh*

Don't give up on it, it's not bad at all!

Solayna · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 3:38 am

By the way... I'd suggest that you get yourself a, for example, virtue.nu account. Geocities doesn't like direct linking and is a real bitch when you need to post pictures >_<

SWANY · Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2001 10:30 pm

Can anyone see the pic on this thread

Magic Zero · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2001 Posts: 43

Ummm i do. Nice pic too.