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Topic : "Mean arse Demon in progress. Please critique. (color)" |
Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 1:37 pm |
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Wow man, that looks great! What did you do this in?! Is it digital?! Only thing that looks out of place to me is that the bicept on the left looks a little too round... maybe you should extend it a bit.. besides that.. it looks all good! |
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Kin Aquila junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2001 Posts: 24 Location: Chemnitz - Germany
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 2:28 pm |
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he definitly needs that bone sword, i guess. can't wait to see it.
and ... yes ... this one muscle appears pretty much ot of place on his left arm.
while the overall pic is great, i really hate his horns. they look like they would easily break - making him look like a junior demon *g*
the scars are well done, i must say. how about some more? |
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Highfive member
Member # Joined: 08 Oct 2001 Posts: 640 Location: Brisbane, AU
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 6:41 pm |
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That's utterly amazing detail, Ztiev! Especially the texture of his skin! Must've been a very complex process.
I like that crazy horn growing out from the crown of his skull and the warped muscles.
I think his hands look a bit too smooth and round, though. He needs some larger uglier knuckles bulging out of his fingers. The hands themselves could probably afford to be bigger, too.
Great work!
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Ztiev junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 33 Location: Utah
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 12:22 am |
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Hi everyone! This is a great board you've got going here.
This is a work in progress. He'll eventually be weilding a gnarly bone sword, which is still in design. So, besides that, please brutally critique it. I want this image to be great.
*Puts on his hockey mask and awaits the barrage.*
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Svanur member
Member # Joined: 14 Aug 2000 Posts: 541 Location: Reykjavik, Iceland
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 12:28 am |
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That's actually pretty cool and I don't know what I can critique  |
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Ztiev junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 33 Location: Utah
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 1:07 pm |
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Thanks everyone! Great suggestions. I'll definately implement them.
This is mostly digital. It's basically just colors overlayed on pencil. The pencils looked like this:
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